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Tuesday, 1 November 2016

Narrative Writing

The Great Rescue (Maybe)
It was a glorious sunny Wednesday morning, what Biqi, Kirsten, Kate, Fariha, Sakshi, Ridhi, and Kaia would expect. This was an exciting event, now you haven’t seen what's gonna happen next! The girls changed out of their pyjamas and ran up to get some breakfast, they were all running out in a flash. They could smell the strong smell of the waffles, and the creamy maple syrup. They all looked at the waffles in awe and Fariha looked like she was gonna snatch every single waffle and stuff them into her mouth, her eyes were big. They went to meet up with all the other people camping. “Now for today you all are going to go on a Popsicle stick hunt, you have to get into groups then you’re gonna go find some popsicle sticks and they have to be your groups color, and the group with the most is going to get a prize.” Said Mrs P. “Well that sounds fun!” Biqi said with excitement. “We’re all gonna be in a group, agreed?” Kirsten said after. “Agreed!” Everybody shouted. And so they ran out onto the field. “We’re gonna have to split up, me, Biqi, and Fariha are together, and Kate, Sakshi, Ridhi, and Kaia are together, is that ok?” Fariha said. “Yep” Ridhi agreed. So they split up and started searching as quick as possible. After a few minutes of searching, Fariha started dancing like a crazy chicken who just won the lotto she kept on dancing and dancing. “She’s a crazy woman” Biqi whispered to Kirsten. Then.. she fell, “BAHAHHAAAHAHAH” Kirsten laughed so hard she couldn’t catch her breath. “Let's go check if she's ok rather than laugh your head off 😂” Biqi said as she and Kirsten ran up the hill. “HELPP!!” Fariha shouted. “OH MY GOSH! SHE’S MIGHT’VE FELL OFF A CLIFF!!” Biqi shouted with a shock. “Well what are you waiting for? We gotta save this crazy chicken!!” Kirsten as she started to burst out laughing again. “First lets call the others! We might need some backups.” Biqi said. They started calling the others names and they got up to us. “What happened?” Ridhi said. “The CRAZY CHICKEN fell off a cliff!” Sakshi and Kirsten said as they started to burst out laughing. “And who's the CRAZY CHICKEN? Kaia was about to burst out laughing like Kirsten and Sakshi were. They all ran up to the edge of the hill to check out Fariha. “HALPPPPP!!” Fariha kept on yelling for help. “WHERE ARE YOUUUUUU” Ridhi shouted while she started searching for Fariha. “A parachute would be helpful wouldn’t it? Kate said. “True, we’ll use my parachute because I thought it would come in handy” Kaia said as she grabbed a colorful parachute. “WHEREVER YOU ARE GRAB ONTO THE PARACHUTE OK?? OK!” Ridhi yelled as Kirsten did a face palm “You don’t have to yell Ridhi!!” They all got on their knees on the edge of the cliff “SURPRISE!” Fariha shouted. “AH!” Everybody was in shock. “You scared us!!” Biqi said frightened. “I just wanted to see how you would react!!” Fariha said giggling. “Well that gave us a fright!” Ridhi said. “OK guys let's quickly find some coloured Popsicle sticks other than keep on talking” Kate demanded. The end. :)

3 comments:

  1. Hi biqi,
    I liked your story. I really liked your descriptive language too. I also liked the part when I pranked everyone I fell of a cliff.

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  2. Hi biqi,
    I liked your story. I really liked your descriptive language too. I also liked the part when I pranked everyone I fell of a cliff.

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    1. Hey Fariha,
      Thank you so much for your awesome feedback. I thought it would be very funny for you pranking everyone that you fell off a cliff :)

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